Friday, October 4, 2013

Descriptive Essay - Morning Coffee and a Quick Ride in the Fog.

I woke up to the sound of the most ridiculous alarm ring tone you can imagine.  It sounded like farm animals singing along to techno music.  I knew if I chose that particular tone and plugged my phone into the charger on the opposite side of the room I would have to get out of bed to silence the insanity.  Sometimes after staying up late to study, I have to trick myself into getting out of bed in the morning. I was tired enough to just cancel the appointment I had scheduled to look at a house.  I hurled myself out of bed to shut off the alarm and drug myself into the kitchen to make some coffee.  After the third cup of Caribou’s Obsidian Espresso Roast I enthusiastically decided to jump into my riding pants and moto-boots.  I stomped around the house with a sort of, “I’m running late” type of energy. I was not going to be late, I was excited and all jacked up on coffee.

I opened the garage door and started to back my motorcycle out into the drive way.  Burrr, I quickly checked the weather on my phone.  Holy crap it’s only forty five degrees outside.  The air is crisp and thick with fog do dense I couldn’t even see my neighbors’ house across the street.  I spun the key, reached down, pulled out the choke and pushed start.  I love the purring sound my Kawasaki makes when the engine is revving high as it warms up.  I strapped on my helmet, slid on my gloves, pushed the choke back in and hopped on my motorcycle.


A quick left turn out of the neighborhood and then a right turn onto the highway.  First gear, second gear, third then forth and I was up to speed with the rest of traffic all the while the wet fog covered the lenses of my goggles.  I shifted into fifth gear and wiped my lenses off with my thin red racing gloves.  My left hand was soaking wet and my hands were becoming so cold my fingers were stiff.  The sun was trying to peek through the fog. The visibility was getting better until I started winding close to the bluffs.  I felt so much energy from the throttle as my motorcycle brought me closer to my destination.  The smile on my face was so strong my cheeks were sore, or maybe the expression was just frozen that way from the cold smacking the fog against my skin.  I thought to myself, “what an amazing way to start the day", the house I looked at was unlivable.  Without this little adventure it would have been a huge waste of time. I am so glad I didn’t drive the 4-Runner.
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9 comments:

  1. Nice description of waking up. I have this issue also of staying up late trying to get assignments done, and feeling exhausted the next day. When you talked about getting on the bike and shifting all the way to fifth gear, I felt like I was right with you. Although I have never driven a motorcycle, I have been a passenger. Although, I couldnt imagine riding on a cold day like that. It was seventy degrees the last time I was on a bike, and the wind still feels cold. You descibing that gave me chills just reading that. Nice job!

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  2. I like the phrase hurled myself out of bed. Easy to picture. I myself enjoy a brisk morning. You made me think about an ice cold early morning bow hunt I had last weekend. I also enjoy Getting cold in outdoors but I still prefer the option of rolling up a window. Good Job!

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  3. I really connected to your story when you started talking about how cold you were. I have never been on a motorcycle but listening to your story made me think of how I feel when I go horsebackriding. I really liked your sentance about the fog slapping your face. I didn't really notice any typos, good essay.

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  4. I definitely know what its like driving in the fog since I work at 6:30 am. Your story lines up very nicely and is very descriptive. I enjoyed reading it!

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  5. You could really get a feel for how cold it was that morning, and you can just see the fog. Was a good read, no major errors that I noticed. Good job

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  6. nicely illustrated you really captured the emotions and the environment around you with the actual moments of exhilaration riding in the fog early and dismal and your aspect was daunting, nice work.

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  7. A complete thrill of adrenaline! I'm not a coffee drinker so I don't have a clue about that but the rest put me right in place. Couple spelling errors but overall a good piece.

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  8. Good description. I have never ridden a motorcycle before and it gave me a sense of what it might be like.The air is crisp and thick with fog do dense I couldn’t even see my neighbors’ house across the street. That sentence really made me feel what it was like outside that day. Good description. I liked how it was a tough ride being cold but still enjoyable.

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  9. I was drawn in immediately because I can relate to the annoying ringtone- unreachable distance combo, gave me a little laugh. I have never rode a motorcycle through fog but from your description felt as though I knew exactly what it felt like. Couldn't find any errors, good read.

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